Five months worth of good news/bad news
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A lot can happen in five months.

Back in April, I had a completely different life.  I had just completed my second romance novella (Private Encore) and had sent it out on submission.  On the home-front, things were pretty good too.

Then the politically-correct among us would say I had a "life-changing event."

My friends know what happened.  The rest of you can safely assume that my life changed drastically and I'm not going into details here.  Suffice it to say, when one aspect of your life changes that much, everything changes.

Five months later, I think I've pretty much found my footing again in my personal life.  I've finally started writing again. But my personal life has directly affected my professional life.

When I sent out my submissions into the romance world five months ago, I had done a lot of research on whom I was sending my baby to.  They all had good reputations and histories from what I could discern.  Their authors seemed happy.  All good signs.

I received a couple rejections in the first month. 

And then just last week I got it.  A contract offer.  The Holy Grail of writers.  The ultimate prize.  It!!!!

I rejected the offer.

Crazy, right?  Not so much as you may think.

My first reason is that I have received lots of feedback on "Private Encore".  Instead of various random suggestions, the two most common recommendations matched, indicating that I had a couple serious things to fix that would make it much more salable.  And I agreed with them so all was good.  The other comments were very complimentary which I found to be very encouraging.  I have the opportunity to pitch the new and improved "Private Encore" at a conference I'm attending next month.  Like the Dairy Queen commercials, I don't thing "good" is good enough.  Five months is long enough to get new perspective on an old work.

My second reason is that five months can be a long time for a publishing company too.  If I can have a life-changing event, things can certainly change there as well.  In my case, the changes to the company were not in the direction I wanted to go.  I spoke to several current authors and decided that, for several reasons, it would not be in our mutual best interest to proceed with the offer.

So, amazingly, incredibly, almost unthinkably, I received my first professional offer for a romance novel and turned it down.  As much as I want to be published, it was the right thing to do.

Next time, I hope to say that I was offered a publishing contract and I took it.



Tip for new homeowners # 9
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It was a year yesterday that I moved into my new house.  There have been a couple adventures and a couple bills but I've really enjoyed it.  And, as this post will prove, there is still much for me to learn.

Be careful when weeding in a new garden.  You can't be sure in the fall which flowers will come back and which won't.  Take notes or pictures if necessary.  Or else, you may end up pulling a bunch of "weeds" and then realize after the fact that those plants may well have been the pretty purple flowers that looks so nice against that backdrop last summer.

Oops.  Now it's time to see if that particular type of plant comes back not only year after year, but more than once in the same summer.

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May 1 in Winnipeg
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Really, what can you do but grin and bear it?    Or move to Florida where they have hurricanes, or California with their earthquakes or Texas and their tornados.  At least we know this stuff will melt.

Two hobbies
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I've found a couple remarkable similarities between two hobbies that seem entirely unrelated - fishing and writing for publication .

Both are solitary occupations.

Both require participants to sit still for long periods of time.

Both can have long dry spells before you have any success.

And sometimes...

Both get a nibble.  *G*  (Hopefully, more news to come.)

Patience and persistence are rewarded but the reward is awfully hard earned.

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Fall down seven times
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Get up eight.

I took a couple days and then sent out "Private Encore" again.  I have faith in this book.

Somewhat relatedly, I have a confession to make.  I'm usually a homerun hitter.  I've written in a few different formats and I've almost always sold my first attempt (short story, non-fiction article, etc) on the first time out.  I get a ton of rejections after that but my first sale is 99.9% guaranteed.  Until now.  I am more than willing to put in the time but it certainly is easier and a lot more motivating to keep going rather that to get going when it comes to acceptances.

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0 for 2
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"Private Encore" received its first rejection.  It's a good thing we have a long weekend coming up so I can reread the manuscript and the submissions package and send it out again without losing much time.

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ONE OF OUR THURSDAYS IS MISSING by Jasper Fforde
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Book 6 of the Thursday Next series
C 2011

If you haven't read the previous 5 books in the series, I'm sorry to say that reading this one would be a complete waste of your time.  You'd have an easier time of watching the second last episode of "Lost" and, not having seen any other episodes, figuring out what was going one.  If you have read them, you ain't read nothin' yet. 

Only a Jasper Fforde fan could understand this next statement.  One Of Our Thursdays Is Missing is a Thursday Next book but is not about the Thursday Next.  Remember The Great Samuel Pepys Fiasco?  Of course not, it's no longer available.  Remember how the Thursday Next from that book tried out as a Jurisfiction agent in First Among Sequels?  Well, she's back.  The original outland Thursday has gone missing and she is on the case.  Sort of.  In her own way. 

Unfortunately, because this is technically about another person, most of the cast of characters we are used to do not make an appearance.  Or if they do it is brief or as their literary alter-egos.  I didn't find it to be as much fun as past books.  On the upside, Fforde has redesigned BookWorld and his new creation is a whole lot of fun to discover (map provided), as are the other changes inside it.

The book is fun, but it is fun in the way that trying a new restaurant can be fun.  Dishes may have the similar names but they taste a little different.  They are good but it's not the same as what you are used to.  That is this book.

(BUT... I highly recommend the entire Thursday Next series. How do you describe it? It's a riot, in a really warped literary way. If you enjoyed "The Hitchhiker's Guide To the Galaxy", Jasper Fforde is your man. Set in an alternate reality, his main character, Thursday, has the ability to read herself into books. Between her "real world" and the "book world", the reader is taken on an absolutely delightful ride. Start with "The Eyre Affair". You don't have to have read "Jane Eyre" but it helps. And it is not a "Pride and Prejudice and Zombies" type of thing.)

Overall, recommended with the qualifier that you have to know what you are getting into.  Also, I think this is officially the end of the series.

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EMMA by Jane Austen
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c 1815

The review may contain words unsuitable for some Jane Austen fans. Discretion is advised. ) cross-posted to my blog

I am not a-Muse-d
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I don't care. And that's a problem.

I have an idea for a cute little Christmas novella. It's sweet. It's funny. And it's not going to be written any time soon.

The idea for The Naughty List came to me over a year ago when I was just getting serious about writing. I wrote a very rough four pages and then realized that I'd never make the submission cut-off date in June for publication for Christmas 2010. So I set it aside. In the rest of the 2010, I wrote two other novellas (Now Playing and Private Encore) which were submitted. Then came March and I was confident that I could knock off The Naughty List with plenty of time for the deadlines.

I started off strong. The four pages weren't bad at all. I expanded them in to four short chapters and 3200 words. Unfortunately, as I started chapter five, I discovered a problem. I really, really wan't in the mood to write this story. Right now I had no passion to learn or write about the potentially epic romance of Trip and Olive. I've had enough experience with this feeling to realize I'd just be going through the motions. This is a sister experience to compromising on a story. In this case, I think the story is good enough and is worth writing but now is not the time for me to be working on it.

So, back into the drawer it goes although I'll keep it shuffled close to the top. Perhaps I can peck away at is as the mood strikes. In the meantime I need to find a new project to start.

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It doesn't get easier
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I just hit "Send" and emailed my baby to a publisher.  Private Encore, meet the universe.  Universe, meet Private Encore.

Play nice, you two.

Now breathe.

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